Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport,
while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both
views and give your own opinion.
Recently, the question of physical strength or mental strength is important for success in sport have been received a great deal of public attention. Although mental strength is necessary for accomplishment in sport, I believe physical strength will be far more significant.
On the one hand, there are many reasons for people to consider mental strength as a critical part of the success of the sport. First, when people foster a competitive spirit, they will do everything to their ambitions. For example, a person with a win-at-all-costs attitude, he will practice more, eat more healthy food, which helps to boost his physical strength and as a result, he will get his goal in sport. Second, mental strength will help people be stronger after failure, which stimulate them to work more and more so that they can get their aim next time. For instance, Micheal Jordan - a man often lauded as the best basketball player of all time, was actually cut from his high school basketball team, due to strong mental, he worked harder and finally became a celebrity.
On the other hand, I believe physical strength is a decisive factor of success in sport. Because it seems that impossible to get achievement in the sport if people don’t have physical health. For example, to achieve a goal, people need to practice for hours that people physically weak can’t do. Furthermore, all athletes would get hurt from playing sports, which needs rapid recovery from physical strength to continue playing and practice in a short time. In fact, when getting injuries in practice, stronger people will recover quickly than weak people, which will give them more time to practice and get success.
In conclusion, although both mental and physical strength has a crucial part in the success of athletes, I believe physical will be more necessary than mental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64512763969 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5899709651 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355567144557 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156087550178 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815565241606 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250545500793 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543380651563 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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