Some people think that pp should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?
It is said that people should consider income as the overriding factor when seeking a job. I partially agree with this statement.
Money is indispensable in life and no matter what job a person selects, the final purpose is to earn money. Firstly, it’s not a debate that having money helps people meet all their demands. If people have well-paid jobs, they could enjoy a high-quality life, they can buy anything they’ve long for. Besides, everyone has a burden on their family, they have to make ends meet, take care of their relatives, and consistently enhance the quality of their lives. For instance, they always have demands of getting the best healthcare system, their children have chances to attend international schools… On the other hand, people will want to dedicate themselves to an organization if they are assessed and paid as much as what they are deserved to reap.
However, there are some other critical factors that people need to consider when getting a job. First, the work environment, if people work for a company in which they could be content with what they do, whom they work with, they will not feel depressed and always work enthusiastically with less strain. Second, sometimes a person has to find chances to cultivate their qualification and build up their experience before seeking a high salary job.
For example, a student who has just graduated will spend the first one or two years improving their skills to get a well-paid job afterward.
In conclusion, because money is a constant source of worry, people could not overlook the income when seeking a job. However, there are other crucial elements at work that can considerably affect their lives such as environment or development opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0276816609 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72879440227 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.608648591 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279559044586 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11703119388 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874280317754 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166708858301 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511289944292 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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