Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is not denied that parents play a huge role in shaping their children’s value because such children are educated unendingly by their parents. In some cases this is true, however, I would argue that bringing up children in a secure environment is also a vital responsibility of parents.
There are various reasons which can explain why providing children a disciplined education when they were very young is high on parents agenda. Firstly, they give their offspring particular guidance and broaden their horizon about the colorful world, as a result, they are able to move on their career path easily. Secondly, sometimes, they make something wrong, their parents are able to be with you immediately and give them useful advice and tell them about right and wrong, which can help complete themselves.
On the other hand, children are grown up in a safe environment is also a crucial duty and massive concern of parents. First of all, the safe environment means a close-knit family, where the children are lived above their parents’ love and do not have to care about affording the basic necessities of life. Such children are served a good quality of life and education, which create an important buffer for moving up the prospective career ladder. Moreover, the way of nurturing kids marked significant influence on their ability to integrate their seers and catch up with the lectures when they are old enough to go to school. A nutritious diet for kids will give them a healthy brain, in contrast, a poor nutrition deal can cause disorder syndrome in their children.
To sum up, it seems clear that both of these perspectives each have their own unique advantages for the healthy growth of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...do not have to care about affording the basic necessities of life. Such children are served a goo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99651567944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71447132964 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.8855230244 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416714379528 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148439713868 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515071152671 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232156084812 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713834104811 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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