Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world luck of necessary in travelling abroad to recognizethe culture of another humanity and barely learn a lot of information from document, movies and the network. Some people in the society deem that in order to study the civilization of other people do not need to travel , without leaving home with the help of book or internet we can learn more, However, from my point of veiw to realizing how another people exist it needs to see live
To begin with, assumption that veiwing magazine or films of people we can just discover thier history. Bassicaly modern people can discover about anothers from television, reading or network. As a consequence from the internet we can easily find any information which we want influence on. Moreover, it is not necessary to flying off to abroad. Therefore we can spend our money and waste time just.
Nonetheless, people who are on the side of opinion that who believe that in order to learn the history of nattion bettet, you must at list visit their habitats posses more valid justifications. The principal point is that in books and films do not alwas provise accurate information and ambiguosly exaggerate. Outcome of this visiting other countries, learning about thier daily life through local people or communities you know that much of the internet is exaggerated or underestimated.
To sum up I strongly disagree with the notion that people think that to learn the culture of other people easy from books, movie or network.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, you know, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96812749004 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71686907138 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5084695534 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.7 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104964194799 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037921449017 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493748430555 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709726064381 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355615518873 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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