some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. others think that there are more important issues. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that scientific research should focus on solving health problem, other claim that there are more important issue. Naturally everything has its own merit and demerits. In this essay bothsides will be taken into investigation
On one hand, health is a big problem that all people around the world concern. For example, there are lot of people died from diseases, cancer. Milion of people do not have solution to help their life. Beside, in 2019 Covid-19 make their earth become terrible and we were in crisis. And if we have solution for our health, we have energy to do everything. I believe health is related to your life and we need to focus on it
On other hand, many people think we need to focus on other issue like economic, poverty, education. I am understand that why people choose this because they attend to money. But I believe if we do not have health we can not do anything. Many people spend so much money to cure but they can not cure. For example, rich people can not buy happiness and health. So I think health is a top problem of the world
In a nutshell, fitness should be the main part of our investigation as it has an unavoidable and significant role. I belive scientific research shoud focus on solving health problem because as I mentioned have good health we can have everything
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...like economic, poverty, education. I am understand that why people choose this because the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49146777288 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4012841169 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314375403565 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104315387507 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12533812307 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200507174438 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658419382388 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
...like economic, poverty, education. I am understand that why people choose this because the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65254237288 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49146777288 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53813559322 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4012841169 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314375403565 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104315387507 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12533812307 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200507174438 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658419382388 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.