Some people think sports are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are thought to be crucial for society, however, some people think that they should be played for relaxing. I will discuss both of these views in the essay below.
On the one hand, sports play the principal roles in the development of countries. Actually, sports are not only physical but also the culture activities helping improve the relationship between the nations in regions. One clear example is Seagame which is the well-known sport event in Vietnam and South East Asia. It is the competitions between athletes from some countries such as Indonesia, Thailand, Singapore, Malaysia. In addition, there are numerous campaigns established in order to encourage people playing sports to have healthy bodies and avoid illness.
In contrast, some people think that sports are only activities which they play in their freetime for having fun. It is true that sports have various beneficial effects on people life and leisuring is one of those. For instance, many companies organize the sport competitions like running or playing badminton as the team buildings for their employees to reduce anxiety after hard working and enhance the teamwork abilities. One more example is the encouragement from the parents to their children to play some outdoor activities like playing basketball for height improvement.
To sum up, although some people think that sports are just leisure activities, I personaly believe that they also have positive impacts on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34051724138 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66979501834 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0163524757 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302550042522 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114930285341 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894530700046 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214335492038 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968706336874 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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