Nowadays, people are able to use internet to do an increasing number of tasks. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the ever-changing world, the internet is applied in the daily life as the tool assisting people increase the productivity. I opine that this trend could have both positive and negative influences in equal measure, as will be discussed in this essay below.
On the one hand, working online brings beneficial effects on people’s life. The major advantage of this development trend is offering people the number of new job opportunities because of the potential development of internet to develop business projects. For instance, thousands of new professions, including youtubers and KOLS have made an enormous amount of money by creating informative content through Youtube platform. Another advantage is the enhancement in the labor productivity in workplaces, schools thanks to the development of the internet. By utilizing Skype and Padlet, people can eliminate several tasks simply by listing and taking note.
Despite the fact that the internet allows human beings to work online, it could be observed as a disadvantage for several reasons. Firstly, family members are likely to lose the close-knit relationship and become less emotionally connected with each other as the convenience from multipurpose applications which help people living far from home communicate with their families without traveling a long distance. Therefore, there is the reduction in the face-to-face interaction connecting and invoking feelings between humans. Secondly, the challenge of cyber crimes become more severe due to the technological advancement. Hackers now easily send a virus link to deceive bank users and rob all money in their bank accounts. As a matter of fact, millions of cases around the world are reported to be defrauded by anonymous people on the Internet and lead to both privacy and financial issues of inhabitants.
In conclusion, in spite of the adverse impacts, I deem that how the internet changes the way people live and work can be beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4249201278 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00422455328 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5787553376 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242262149524 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652004170397 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668370194968 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140007646855 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785966588469 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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