Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing, martial arts, should be banned from TV and international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Games are an essential part of our lives, as well as helping to improve the health of the body. Some sections of society think that sports that promote violence like wrestling, fighting and combative arts should be banned; however, I express my disagreement with this thinking by forming my own opinion while discussing the same consideration of the people in the following article.
Firstly, I support so many violent games because of the challenging moments that come up. In other words, games like these make us aware of our limitations in doing something and give us a chance to test our mental and physical strength. Today's young generation get positive influence from athletics and tend to participate in them. For example, World Wrestling Entertainment is an American wrestling federation that has made a name for itself in wrestling, with wrestlers from all over the world using their strength to become champions and raise the profile of their country. Many youngsters get affected and devote their lives to the gymnasium to make themselves wrestlers consequently, enter the arena of this federation and earn a lot of wealth and fame with their performances.
Moreover, the second advantage of this fighting game is that women get much training for their defence. With a thorough knowledge of the techniques found in so many competitions, especially boxing, women and young literate girls can protect themselves from a tragic event, including Eve teasing and molestation. Thus, by learning competitions like this, a woman living in every part of the world can protect and keep herself safe.
Lastly, I fully agree with the promotion of this type of sport, keeping in mind the benefits of the above article in its entirety, because incorporating these contests into our lives gives us the courage and something to do; therefore, there should not be any restriction on playing these daring sports.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, lastly, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15434083601 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80550263015 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610932475884 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7871373526 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.727272727 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123470585063 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383972844174 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586255796427 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831086750167 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608555617019 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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