It is believed by few individuals that traffic offences are reduced by giving stringent punishments to driving criminals whereas some people claim this notion and said that other feasible methods are more useful instead of giving punishments.I will discuss both these views along with my opinion.
To embark with, giving strict penalties is the best option to reduce the traffic accidents, because it creates the fear among the reckless drivers. Due to which, it helps to government to set an example among the citizens that they do not do this type of crime again and again.Moreover, some reckless drivers drive the vehicle's with high speed.The reason is that, they are awful persons and do not have the fear of rules and regulations.Owing to which, they do this crime more than once.As a result, giving punishment is better for driving offences.
However, there are many measures to stop the traffic accidents.First and foremost measure is awareness campaigns should be organised by high officials.These campaigns encourage the people to drive the motor's slowly.Another measure is to take the driving licences from criminals for short period of time by traffic police. It realise their mistake as well as teaches
them.
After analysing all the key points, I would like to conclude that both punishments and measures are crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, well, whereas, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26046511628 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86217003455 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.942667732 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.5 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336320439617 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141488355434 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954408319556 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188232761182 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723101923095 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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