According to some people history teaches us nothing about our current life but others believe that study from the past is useful for valuable information. I would discuss both views in this essay and give my opinion.
To commence with, Life of individuals change with the change in time, and eveyday day they experience something new, so in this case our past will not help us with our changing lifestyle. with the new invent in technology their is major differnce in todays life and life before 21st centuary. In past people do manual work with little to no use of machines, but in our busy schedule we use technically advanced machines instead for manual labour. For instance, nowadays, in every house there are microwaves to cook food but they not exist in past . Therefore, in this case we are moving forward and learn new things with time not from past.
On contrary, past teaches us many moral values. We learn values like sacrifice for our country and brotherhood. In our history people live together and share their resources, which in no longer in our upcoming future. So our history help children to learn such morals from their past which give them information about how to maintain equality.
Finally, I opine that, history is the precious gift for us to gain valuable information but due to invent of technology history is of very less value. So we should have to learn from past and there is need of applying it into our technological life.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ot help us with our changing lifestyle. with the new invent in technology their is m...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...tyle. with the new invent in technology their is major differnce in todays life and l...
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Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r manual labour. For instance, nowadays, in every house there are microwaves to c...
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Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...rowaves to cook food but they not exist in past . Therefore, in this case we are moving...
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Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to cook food but they not exist in past . Therefore, in this case we are moving f...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tory is the precious gift for us to gain valuable information but due to invent o...
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Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd there is need of applying it into our technological life.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75889328063 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.474746906 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9951180453 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299565174936 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112322597089 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934519500712 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222597148212 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150870145202 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
...ot help us with our changing lifestyle. with the new invent in technology their is m...
^^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...tyle. with the new invent in technology their is major differnce in todays life and l...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r manual labour. For instance, nowadays, in every house there are microwaves to c...
^^
Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...rowaves to cook food but they not exist in past . Therefore, in this case we are moving...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 547, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to cook food but they not exist in past . Therefore, in this case we are moving f...
^^
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tory is the precious gift for us to gain valuable information but due to invent o...
^^
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd there is need of applying it into our technological life.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75889328063 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.474746906 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569169960474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9951180453 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299565174936 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112322597089 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934519500712 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222597148212 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150870145202 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.