Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Being successful is a measure by which portion of the society use to judge the other’s intelligence; however, nowadays there are other methodologies to determine the amount of the intelligence. In my opinion intelligence is not the only reason for success, so in this essay I will discuss why I think so.
Intellectual abilities are the main factor to be effective in many aspects of our life, but it is not the only factor to achieve success. Other factors such as good manners, having the minimum requirements of communication skills and also to know how to deliver your messages in an understandable way is significantly important. For example, some of the school students are very brilliant in solving hard mathematical problems yet, they don’t prefer to practice any kind of sport activities and they tend to stay isolated from other pupils.
In the recent decades, other methods to acquire the quantity of intelligence arose. These procedures were scientifically created and tested to give a true image about our mental skills. IQ tests as an example is a set of questions determined to measure our way of thinking and how we face and solve problems. Also psychometric analysis became mandatory in nearly all the international work fields, where the employees are frequently examined to ensure the effectiveness of their intellectual performances.
In conclusion, some people think that success is a sign of having brilliant mind, but I believe having such minds don’t guarantee either wining or victory; consequently, other factors are taken into account to measure our mental abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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Message: Consider replacing "in an understandable way" with adverb for "understandable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing and how we face and solve problems. Also psychometric analysis became mandatory ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21705426357 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11679003871 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647286821705 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6329352255 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335884488185 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109516989175 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731597825313 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190197953427 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727001404056 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.