Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
It is argued that success in life is a valuable indicator of intelligence. This essay agrees with that suggestion completely because brilliant people have a unique characters enable them to succeed. This essay will first look at the cause of considering success as a good indicator of intellect and then discuss the way to achieve that.
As success in life is a complicated process; only intelligent people can afford it. This is because of having extraordinary intellectual functions due to presence of specific neurochemical transmitters in their brains. For example, in a study done by Harvard University revealed that there is a strong correlation between satisfactions in life and higher Intelligent Quotient (IQ) with elevated levels of brain chemicals.
A clever one always uses his/her abilities to criticize every situation to gain overwhelmingly benefits. This matter, situational critical analysis, is an important step in success pathway. For example, a famous company manager, in a television interview, mentioned that he used to analyse his daily activities and learned from it.
In conclusion, prosperity in life is a principal determinant of intellect among people because it increases their abilities to pass every obstacles and booster their chances in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'character'?
Suggestion: character
... because brilliant people have a unique characters enable them to succeed. This essay will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49746192893 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18218649788 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7889431878 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106525801413 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438121664663 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495092462285 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582819000556 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409555486646 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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