Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think intelligence can be measured in other ways.
What is your opinion?
Recently, measuring intelligence success has mostly become a significant problem. It’s agreed by some that success is just one of the ways in which people can show their acuity. Yet there are others who believe success is the best measure for intelligence. Both view points will be outlined in the essay.
Nowadays, most intelligent people are successful. As they have the ability to create something innovative, something that the society has never witnessed before and with that invention they become rich, well-known and fortunate. As an example, Elon Musk the co-founder and leads Tesla and SpaceX, studied at university of Pennsylvania and he was really smart and now he became one of the most important figures. Moreover, once people know how to use their high IQ they will start achieving new impressive targets.
On the other hand, Intelligence should not be restricted to success as there are numerous people in this world who aren’t successful but they are intelligent. They prove their intelligence not through success but through various forms of abilities, including creativity, problem-solving skills and more. An example of this is a highly creative person who might not have obtained recognition by the world but displays an exceptional way of thinking in his field. For instance, a person may win a prize or financial success, although he has limited way of thinking he has had the opportunity to succeed through luck.
In conclusion, despite people having different views. I believe that success is not the best measure for intelligence as people have many other abilities so they can be measured with other than success in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17537313433 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85647184265 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7810162115 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386737792157 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132795874814 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125877829282 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262018068652 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141496461787 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.