Some people think that there are benefits in going to private Secondary School. Feels that private Secondary Schools have negative on the society as a whole. Discuss both the points.

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Some people think that there are benefits in going to private Secondary School. Feels that private Secondary Schools have negative on the society as a whole. Discuss both the points.

In a salad of Millennium the society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that weather, scholars educating in deemed intermediate schools are benefited for it have drawback which probably be highly imposed on the society. Different people have distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches giving the final verdict.

To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First and foremost is well planned education system for the students. As a result nowadays, every private classroom are equipped with modern smart class facilities that have feature of three-dimensional demonstration which helps the individual studying and private school to gain the most. Moreover, individual counselling is also provided to those students who seems to be weak in studies. instance guardians Of Those students preparing a youth sum of money so they are also liable to receive the same quality of education. Henceforth, individual tuition and perfect guidance is provided by the teachers in those schools.

Shifting towards the second school of thought, there are various inappropriate parameters which can influence the future of an individual while a scholar is studying in a private school. Hence, there is great influence made by those friends who are belonging from an affluent family. For example, sometimes children's are easily persuaded by those students who are under the addiction of drugs and they circulate this diseases and forms of cycle. Secondly, it can be said that there is a loose wastage of capital while sending the students in private school. Consequently, it is OK to the person if he or she is willing to study they can but if there parents admire that their children's would benefits while going into an extravagant school by exhausting mammoth capital then it is a wrong perception.

Having discuss the arguments and counter arguments I would like to infer that, it would be melodious for students to study in government funded School or convent school because is school provides saying education at lower budget. To justify my state of mind, there is an instance that school is a place where one can gain knowledge and convert that knowledge by hard work to become successful and sagacious in future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...result nowadays, every private classroom are equipped with modern smart class fac...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'featured'.
Suggestion: featured
...modern smart class facilities that have feature of three-dimensional demonstration whic...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instance
...udents who seems to be weak in studies. instance guardians Of Those students preparing a...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[4]
Message: The verb belong is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...eat influence made by those friends who are belonging from an affluent family. For example, s...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...eat influence made by those friends who are belonging from an affluent family. For example, s...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e addiction of drugs and they circulate this diseases and forms of cycle. Secondly, ...
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Line 5, column 693, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...rents admire that their childrens would benefits while going into an extravagant school ...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...work to become successful and sagacious in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18933333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76247103554 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2991912278 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210846259749 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610002969321 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063279434803 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125579157071 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278310361768 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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