Some people think there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want.

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Some people think there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want.

Some people say that we should control about noise strictly. While some people think that they could make noise as they like, I would agree that it would be better to reduce noise.
One the one hand, there are some reasons why some people want to make noise as they like. Firstly, many people feel more comfortable and relax when they creating noise while working or entertaining. For example, my younger sister often listens to music with loud volume, which can help her relieving stress after hard studying and working time. Secondly, people often consider noise as a part of industrialization and modernization process, therefore it is unavoidable. Traffic noise becomes more closely with urban citizens. As a result, they feel that there are no particular reasons to limit noise.
One the other hand, I believe that it is necessary to control strictly about noise. The first reason, noise has a negative effect on people’s healthy. For example, my house is near roadway, so I often have to suffer from traffic noise. I can’t sleep well and concentrate for anything such as reading book, doing my homework. If this situation lasts for a long time, it can cause serious mental and physical health. In addition, effective working may be reduced. So I think that the government should build rules to control noise.
In conclusion, I believe that noise should be controlled to have a better life, although some people are interested in making a lot of noise without any consideration for other.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to relieve' or 'relieve'.
Suggestion: to relieve; relieve
...ic with loud volume, which can help her relieving stress after hard studying and working ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99603174603 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6596036234 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5972817911 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6875 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460956810496 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140249359477 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132299086623 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305876209565 0.151304729494 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143003037744 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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