Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option.
A few people suppose that they can use freshwater however they want and on the other hand other people think that government should maintain the usage of freshwater due to the fact that it is a limited resource. In my view, I reckon that government have to take action to control the usage of pure water.
There are few sources that human beings need to exist such as; food, water and money. However, water is the most important thing that everyone needs to live. Currently, some people think that have the right to use water however they want. Although, if people use water without any restrictions it will provide negative consequences for the environment. For instance, there will be a water shortage in the future if people not control the usage of freshwater. Researchers have stated that by 2050 people won’t be able to use water, the way they use water now. Owing to that reason people need to protect water from now on.
Government should obligate to control the usage of water to protect it for the future generation. Specially in urban areas people are wasting water dramatically. For example; Colombo is the city that waste water a lot than other cities in Sri Lanka and due to that majority of people can’t use freshwater so, they buy water from the supermarkets. In addition, in rural areas we can see there are water sources than urban areas owing to that rural people don’t waste water a lot. In my view government have to control the water usage in urban areas then rural areas because people in cities are busier than the people in villages and they will waste water a lot.
To sum up, I strongly believe that government have to step up to control the usage of water to protect it for the future I suggest that, government have to provide water every morning so, people can collect it and use for the entice day without wasting it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g so, people can collect it and use for the entice day without wasting it.
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the entice day without wasting it.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36409474965 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427272727273 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0623830168 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384924846413 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159936747019 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118123976678 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275483803343 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891723841262 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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