Some people think traveling abroad is a valuable experience for young people. Others think it wastes too much time and expense. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Civilization creeped in, thereby demanding people to be flawless. Hence, a majority of individuals spend lavishly on clothes, haircut and beauty products to improve their looks. Thus, arose a disparity in opinion, whereby, some feel that this expenditure is genuine while others think that money can be driven elsewhere to be used efficiently. However, I concur, with the second statement and so believe that it should be spent effectively. this essay will discuss reasons for this discrepancy in views.
Sadly, unaware of the saying that goes “anything in excess is poison”. individuals spend more and more money on perishable things. Although, this century demands for good outfit and trendy hairstyles for fame and recognition, it hardly gives us happiness over a long run. Undoubtedly, spending money raises our standards and imparts certain level of confidence and security. Additionally, it is absolutely fine to pamper ourselves occasionally but putting money on things that fades away is useless.
Most important thing is behaviour and inner beauty and not prettiness of face. spending a lot on beautifying products can be deleterious. There are examples, where people even lost their on attempting to be like someone whom they considered pretty. Finally, at the end pockets will be empty so the soul.
In contrast, money spent on nutritious food, exercise and other activities like travelling is the best invitation for beauty. A healthy body lights up from within and renders glow to the face, this glow is better than the artificial blush, of course. money utilised on exercise and nutritious food support our health, reduces wrinkles and keep us young and active over years unlike beauty products, that are short lasting with harmful effects.
To conclude, spending bounty of money to gather sadness at old age is foolishness and should be utilised effectively to earn happiness of healthy and young body.
- Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason behind this? Is this a negative or positive development? 84
- The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. 73
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion. 73
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, look, second, so, thus, while, in contrast, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38562091503 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84380579624 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8035298391 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963687355123 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252641185216 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358352508184 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0466429782426 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313462909003 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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