Now a day's if we see on urbanization, we find that there's quality of life is decreasing gradually. As per my opinion there are three major causes.
The most and important cause is pollution. The lots of bunch of peoples move from villages to cities for jobs and business. Due to this movement population of urban cities are gradually increasing day by day. Due these population, peoples are need a transportation to moving one place to another place, hence most of them purchase a Vehicles. And these vehicles are generate more pollution in air and sound. And these pollution are effect on human life where we can see that most of urbanization citizen's are suffering from disease timely.
The second most cause is work pressure. Due increasing in competition every person work hard in their job field some time they sit in the office late night. Due to work presser and continuing working most of employee feel tiredness every day and may be some employees go under depression.
The third cause is increase in cost of living. We can see that now a days it's difficult to urban middle man to fulfill their basic needs such as electricity, water, health etc. due high consumption and costlier pricing.
If we need to improve quality of life in urban areas, than we need to restrict to these movement of population form villages & small towns to big cities. And it's can only possible by development in infrastructure and job opportunities. Due these development small town & village public find the opportunity in there land, than they don't have to need move to other land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days if we see on urbanization, we find that...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days if we see on urbanization, we find that...
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...if we see on urbanization, we find that theres quality of life is decreasing gradually...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uality of life is decreasing gradually. As per my opinion there are three major ca...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun bunch seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of bunches'.
Suggestion: lots of bunches
...t and important cause is pollution. The lots of bunch of peoples move from villages to cities...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'these populations'?
Suggestion: this population; these populations
...re gradually increasing day by day. Due these population, peoples are need a transportation to m...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a vehicle' or simply 'Vehicles'?
Suggestion: a vehicle; Vehicles
...ther place, hence most of them purchase a Vehicles. And these vehicles are generate more p...
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Suggestion: generated
...hase a Vehicles. And these vehicles are generate more pollution in air and sound. And th...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pollution' or 'these pollutions'?
Suggestion: this pollution; these pollutions
...te more pollution in air and sound. And these pollution are effect on human life where we can s...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ease in cost of living. We can see that now a days its difficult to urban middle man to fu...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... in cost of living. We can see that now a days its difficult to urban middle man to fu...
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
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...improve quality of life in urban areas, than we need to restrict to these movement o...
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Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'these movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; these movements
...rban areas, than we need to restrict to these movement of population form villages & small tow...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...frastructure and job opportunities. Due these development small town & village public find the op...
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
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...lic find the opportunity in there land, than they dont have to need move to other la...
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Suggestion: don't
...he opportunity in there land, than they dont have to need move to other land. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt have to need move to other land.
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290540540541 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.131756756757 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097972972973 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405405405405 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0472972972973 0.0437548338989 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114864864865 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73726012521 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0439189189189 0.0326793684256 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0777027027027 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135135135135 0.021408717616 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00337837837838 0.011925033212 28% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1586.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83088235294 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286764705882 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227941176471 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169117647059 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117647058824 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73726012521 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.6371680018 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9481067229 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2941176471 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7743622355 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.814263465372 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.99599198397 425% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.7941176471 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.96923076923 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297475939366 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.076556206655 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715132635822 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50322172861 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143921539836 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11532845834 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718442188345 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196129320277 0.324371583561 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0339472853715 0.0638462369009 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174343339417 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264549309089 0.058150111329 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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