Some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Universities from the cradle of time were the source of knowledge and wisdom. The people attend
college to gain the enough information and skills to be able to use it in the real life, whether to
understand the life or to solve problems they face. Providing knowledge aout outdated science or
unapplicable theories is without doubt very wrong. This essay will discuss this idea further, and also
will present the impact of preparing the graduates for the work.
Choosing the materials provided in the college should be done by experts to avoid any useless sciences.
Having to study outdated theorems or unapplicable theories could hinder the educational progress of
the students. For the first, I remember one of my friends suffered from an ancient course, where he has
to spend a full term studying the early theories and rules. For the later reason, the early man was
interested to learn about the world in order to know how to achieve his needs easier, so what good is a
science that no one can apply?. The next paragraph will discuss how it could affect our lives greatly.
Preparing graduates to be more useful for their country is an important matter. The economy in most
developed countries depends on the available work force and how productive and skillful are they. On
the other side, the lack of brilliant minds could leads to importing foreigners to close the gap between
the offered and the demanded which will cause more loss and increase the spendings.
To sum up, The education institutes main role were and still to prepare their students to face the world
and gain new skills to approach real problems. In my opinion, Focusing on transforming the studets
into efficient employees in the workplace should be their top priority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9797979798 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54561932732 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622895622896 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6043446252 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.642857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16641922995 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051876642944 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408925637716 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459568989819 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457913503952 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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