Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of universities should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of universities should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful for an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of universities?

An increasing number of individuals are concern about the goals of education university. Whether they should mainly focus on job-related abilities or pure knowledge has sparked intensely heated debate. Practical skills, in my judgment, should be prioritized in the education of colleges.

First of all, it is an indisputable fact that for most students, the purpose of deriving a university education is to obtain specific knowledge and skills, which will enable them to become competent employees for the workforce of the future. This is because most of them, after graduation, will enter the workplace, earn their living, and raise their own families. Consequently, as service providers, universities have to give top priority to the genuine demands of these consumers.
Equally importantly, focusing on job-related skills can benefit the university itself. For example, the science-fiction blockbuster "Avatar" has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and sparked massive interest in 3-D technology. If a university can quickly respond and consolidate teaching resources to offer courses regarding 3-D, not only will its graduates be more competitive in the near future, but the university itself will keep pace with the modern technological development and move forward.
However, It is not that I am against university paying any attention to pure scientific research. There are, of course, students interested in theoretical knowledge such as math and philosophy, and they will later become scientists and scholars who will make greater contributions to our society. But unfortunately, these people are few.
Ultimately though, the major function of universities should be providing students with job-related skills, guaranteeing a high rate of employment, and thus making the society function well. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the other important roles universities are undertaking. Only by doing so can universities maintain dynamic and sustainable development.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, of course, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77627118644 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27932420642 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654237288136 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9111883789 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287127509988 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809842781926 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535117797338 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139172979865 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527130914539 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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