Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to the knowledge for its own sake, regardless whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
In some extent people believe that universities should be functioned in a search way that it can generate graduates having knowledge and skills that will be required and give them upper hand at their work place while others people think that giving access to knowledge for its own betterment is more important than the usefulness of these courses for an employee. However, in my opinion providing relevant knowledge and expertise should be main function of University to its graduate.
relevant knowledge that can be implemented in a working life can boost someone confidence in their respective job fields. if anyone already has some skills skill set, it will be easier for him to do better all the tasks he will be assigned for. Moreover, he will be able to complete these works efficiently which will broaden his institution's fame as well as his university name. For instance, CEO of google Shundor Pichai was an IIT graduate. Who was given extra chance by their department for learning programming. Thus he took chances and made him topped that brought fame for IIT too. What if he would a graduate from arts college? It would be tough for him to reach at his present condition. There are lot of example who is doing better in work place having knowledge and skill relevant to his education. Thus, University courses should be designed on such way that can accelerate someone excellence in his future career.
On the other hand, if function of a university is designed for only its own sake over the usefulness of a job it would bring enormous jobless young graduates. As most of the companies, institutions prefer employer having experience or relevant strong knowledge. Thus their may occur a unpleasant situation in overall system. For instance, if thousands of graduates are made every year it is impossible for the university to manage position for all of them. In the mean time, they will struggle to manage job at somewhere else having lack of knowledge and skills. So, this function for a university for its graduates will not be an appropriate one in my opinion.
To conclude, to run at the same pace with fast moving world a university should provide relevant knowledge and skills Through their curriculumn to its graduates thus they can conquer their job place using their previous experiences what they gathered from their respective University.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned in a search way that it can generate graduates having knowledge and skills t...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e graduates having knowledge and skills that will be required and give them uppe...
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Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... these courses for an employee. However, in my opinion providing relevant knowle...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...wever, in my opinion providing relevant knowledge and expertise should be main f...
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Suggestion: Relevant
...nction of University to its graduate. relevant knowledge that can be implemented in a ...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: If
...idence in their respective job fields. if anyone already has some skills skill se...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...job fields. if anyone already has some skills skill set, it will be easier for him to...
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Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...chance by their department for learning programming. Thus he took chances and made him topp...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ir department for learning programming. Thus he took chances and made him topped tha...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... As most of the companies, institutions prefer employer having experience or rel...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...xperience or relevant strong knowledge. Thus their may occur a unpleasant situation ...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... strong knowledge. Thus their may occur a unpleasant situation in overall system...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s their may occur a unpleasant situation in overall system. For instance, if tho...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...priate one in my opinion. To conclude, to run at the same pace with fast moving...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96725440806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7118860987 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521410579345 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1372503209 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.789473684 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382004234631 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109813382417 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109379675914 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265305970927 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146144708284 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ned in a search way that it can generate graduates having knowledge and skills t...
^^
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e graduates having knowledge and skills that will be required and give them uppe...
^^
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... these courses for an employee. However, in my opinion providing relevant knowle...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wever, in my opinion providing relevant knowledge and expertise should be main f...
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Line 2, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Relevant
...nction of University to its graduate. relevant knowledge that can be implemented in a ...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...idence in their respective job fields. if anyone already has some skills skill se...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...job fields. if anyone already has some skills skill set, it will be easier for him to...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
...chance by their department for learning programming. Thus he took chances and made him topp...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ir department for learning programming. Thus he took chances and made him topped tha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As most of the companies, institutions prefer employer having experience or rel...
^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...xperience or relevant strong knowledge. Thus their may occur a unpleasant situation ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... strong knowledge. Thus their may occur a unpleasant situation in overall system...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s their may occur a unpleasant situation in overall system. For instance, if tho...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...priate one in my opinion. To conclude, to run at the same pace with fast moving...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96725440806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7118860987 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521410579345 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1372503209 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.789473684 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382004234631 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109813382417 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109379675914 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265305970927 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146144708284 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.