Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

It is widely acknowledged that issues of language barriers became severer under the influence of globalization. Some people consider that a new international language for develop for communication. I feel that this invention will have more benefits such as exchange of literature, art, tourism and culture.
To begin with, one of the most obvious advantage of having an international language is ease of communication among people living in different part of world. For example, people living in west can easily communicate and exchange information with people living in east and south. Moreover, this will also ease trading in different part of world which will bring prosperity in poor areas. An international language will ease the tourism this is because people can go to different parts of world without having understanding issues with locals. For example, Europeans can visit Asians countries without translators and can better learn about their culture and values. An international language will also allow people from under developed countries to get their higher education from globally recognized institutes as they will better understand the concepts in common language.
On the other hand, problems associated with new language should not be ignored. First of all, invention of new language will have a detrimental impact on some minority or endangered languages. Hindi, for example, is under the threat of widespread use of English causing Indian people and their future generation to lose their unique cultural identity. Moreover, speaking the same language all the time might inhibit the growth of brains. Scientist have found that children’s who are bilingual tend to have better academic performance then those who can speak one language as learning another language enhance their brain’s development.
To sum up, while developing an international language have disadvantages such as risk of extinction of local languages and cultural identity, these must be weighed against advantage of exchange of literature, art and tourism. Personally, I feel that advantage of having an international language outweigh its disadvantages.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (3 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, i feel, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5993883792 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04883917674 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553516819572 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2009402557 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293526270594 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110060864821 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949617924727 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196758617118 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851853648216 0.056905535591 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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