It is argues that whether or not juveniles should choose their job by own or any strategy or regulation would be followed considering their future. this essay will going to discuss the both opinion in upcoming paragraphs before forming any statement.
Primarily , the one who advocates that youngsters has been given a chance to do job according to their choice because they are mature enough to make their decision according to their capabilities. To extend it, after completion of their secondary education students not only well grown up but also, leads to their life towards impressive growth trajectory. Such as , numerous of celebrities like Alia Bhatt, David Dhawan bloom out their hidden talent in film industry and reach beyond domain. Another reinforcing fact about favor of this, passion. To clarify it, passion behind any work makes it more successful owing to fact that children started having keen interest in some special job so they must given autonomous to do that job otherwise they feel under impression and do not get productive . As a result it would be judicious to do service consistent with preference.
Moving towards another who oppose it , they thought that job conformity with predicting about future is better and effective. To explain it, as many under developed nations people are indulge in doing labor without their need and thinking about future which tend to decline their productivity and less chance of their promotion too. An optimal example , a survey stated that 70% of youngsters engrossing in activity which they not know what is their future persuasion .Consequently, it would be enrich their belongings and fulfil their requirement adequately if it consider under proper guidance. Furthermore, planned things give reliable and accurate result. To add to it, blueprinting of something would results in far more fruitful and flourish the life of employees if they are doing the job considering their potentiality. Placement of youngsters is one of the operative instance to clear it when students got job after giving befitting interviews and followed the pragmatic approach of getting job then it would be beneficial to both job seeker and job giver.
To recapitulate it, I reckon that job after realistic approach is far more reaching consequences rather then when students start doing job as per their own because it gives them challenge which are complicated to bear with so, occupation would be advantageous if consider under directions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, second, so, then, well, i reckon, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22305764411 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80631945429 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583959899749 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0359169674 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.933333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326776124992 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103335276312 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599813723595 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198041628501 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063376561253 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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