In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Family has always been a controversial topic od debate for ages. Some people think that they should live in extended family groups in order to get more important life lessons from their parents. However, I believe that living in small family units would be prefered in the future.
On the one hand, people living in extended family will be received constant judgement or criticism from the old. Besides, youngsters can have more attentions and the cares from their grandparents. Although people will be controlled and influenced from their grandparents when living with them, they can get more valuable life experience that help them in the future.
On the other hand, living alone or in small family units defenitely give them a chance to have the freedom to do as they please. Without nagging from the older, they will have the more comfortable environment in their own houses. People are more likely to live in slower-paced and healthier life by having cleaner products. In spite of choosing freedomly, people will be lack of the care and attention they need, which can lead to poor family bonds. Moreover, living alone will make children do not have enough knowledges about traditional lifestyles or important traditions.
In conclusion, from my view, living in extended family is a much better choice for young people. In spite of this, there are still some benefits of living alone. I believe that the advantages of living in big family groups outweigh the disadvantages for the reasons I mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment or criticism from the old. Besides, youngsters can have more attentions and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0438247012 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61847872825 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7021328288 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258884013566 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104288550514 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661591438882 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182140457366 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598197416192 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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