Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are valid arguments that advocate for the youth to conform to the customs of their society. Although I am of the opinion that adhering to tradition is essential for the younger generation, I firmly believe that they should be granted the liberty to express their individuality.
Granting young people the freedom to manifest their unique personalities and beliefs is imperative. It is vital that they express themselves and pursue their own interests and passions, thereby developing a sense of autonomy and independence, which are vital for their personal growth and well-being. Furthermore, some traditions may be obsolete or even deleterious, and the youth should be able to challenge and question them. For instance, Vietnam’s previous culture of child marriage has now been almost completely eradicated, thanks to the growing awareness and demand for individual freedom and respect in the community.
However, there are fundamental reasons why societal traditions should be upheld by the youth. Firstly, by adhering to these values, they can learn to appreciate their culture and history, which provide them with a sense of identity and belonging. Additionally, respecting traditions can help people develop a sense of responsibility and discipline, which can prepare them for their future social responsibilities. Children growing up in religious homes that observe frequent prayer and worship, for example, can learn responsibility and discipline from attending these gatherings. They may feel that it is their duty to participate in these religious rituals and uphold their responsibilities to their community.
In conclusion, it is important to encourage young people to preserve and develop traditions while also allowing them the freedom to behave independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64312267658 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16802790765 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6926990921 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228873931447 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898787827868 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559163064485 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147023590045 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148947380804 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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