Some people think that young people should follow social traditions. Others think that they should be free to have their own way of living and behaving. Discuss both statements and give your own opinion?
People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to compulsory subjects or elective subjects. While some argue that universities should solely provide essential courses that are helpful in the future, I am in favor of the idea that everyone has the right to study what they desire to.
There are various reasons why people believe that university should merely offer necessary subjects that are of use in the future. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these subjects provide the chance of employments, high salaries, and therefore an enhanced quality of life for students who take them. On societal position, by forcing them to choose science-related subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps fulfill. Finally, putting a great emphasis on technology-based courses leads to new inventions for humankind, and future prosperity.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that students should be free to choose their preferred areas of study. If people passionate about what they are learning, they will devote their time and energy to pursue the knowledge, as a result, they create a numbẻ of achievements in diverse domains. For instance, Leonardo devoted his life to contemporary arts, and he had some gorgeous paintings that people admire. Especially Monilisa-the painting has still remained its value so far. Besides, nobody can predict which areas of study will predominate over the other ones. In the changing world to adapt, it may be that employers begin to value people that contribute to art areas rather than technology ones.
In conclusion, although some universally acknowledge that university should only focus on useful subjects, I personally prefer self-elective courses for study what they are fond of.
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- Some people think that young people should follow social traditions Others think that they should be free to have their own way of living and behaving Discuss both statements and give your own opinion 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er ones. In the changing world to adapt, it may be that employers begin to value ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37102473498 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85314191447 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3659339205 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188006311734 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631027690417 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482227235818 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111224224079 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485274867015 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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