The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for security of society
It is a common belief that the idea of infringing individual liberties is not ethical conduct. However, I firmly believe that people's freedom should be controlled by government with sensibly justified reasons, following a strict procedure. The purpose of restricting human rights is to safe public order and health care community protection.
First of all, the infringement personal life should be approved to guarantee society system and protect them from danger. Given the increasing crime rate throughout the world, it seems as if strict measures must be taken to prevent potential attacks from crimes, thieves or terrorist organizations. For instance, due to prevent violent conduct in the airport. Security staffs have duties to check passenger's belongings before boarding plane. Even though this intrude on people's privacy, it is necessary to protect them from harm. For these intentions, government agencies should be given the right to carry out searches and intervene one's privacy.
Additionally, government can intervene private life to guarantee social security system. People have to follow regulations strictly such as pay taxes for healthcare insurance or compulsory vaccination. Take the example of the pandemic. In 2020, corona virus spread out around the world. What the government need to do is lockdown all provinces in Vietnam, they don’t allow people to do business and stop all activities . They enforce some corona virus laws that must be followed strictly by people to prevent virus spread out in community .
To sum up, government should infringe private liberties for the security of society. For these reasons, intervening upon individual freedom is sometime necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56923076923 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83739544119 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6611875716 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1764705882 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370177419108 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972491942528 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923320826115 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235194578315 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113622569269 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.43 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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