Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Since recent centuries, human being has tried to keep various kinds of animals in certain places and run animal exhibitions. Although some argue that this is an advantageous measure due to saving them, others, including myself, believe that it should be stopped due to some drawbacks.
First of all, animals tend to be free, and live freely in their natural habitats. Every creature, including animals, feels belonged to where it is born. Taking them from huge forests and open lands, and then transferring them to close environments and small cages is a cruel not-humanistic action. Secondly, most kinds of animals are social, similar to human itself, and like to live as a group. The harsh and sad process of separating them from other members of group probably makes them depressed and reluctant to reproduce. As a result, the population might eventually decrease, which is a dire consequences for whole environments.
On the other hand, ones who believe zoos are beneficial say that scarce species will extinct in the nature, so it is necessary to keep them in protection and to prepare what is needed for making them give birth. Besides, zoos are interesting for people and by means of that their attentions would be attracted to the issue of saving animals. However, rare animals could be controlled in protected areas, even in their original habitats. In addition, people's could be informed about environmental problems, including animal surviving, by other ways like urban and media advertisements.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that though zoos might have some privileges, they should be closed all over the world. This is because it is not ethical to imprison animals in cages, and because this happening makes them be unwilling to have children and consequently leads their population to decline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15824915825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80221674526 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5035372481 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216667125798 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715583185122 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066507415824 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12759018904 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730446433334 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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