Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Workplace matter always raises concerns from people, especially those who take part in the labor market. Some people hold the belief that it is advisable to work in one corporation for an entire lifetime, while others argue that working for different organizations brings great benefits. In this essay, both of these opinions will be discussed but the idea of employing different companies will be favored.
There are a few merits that staffing at the same corporation can bring to employees. First of all, they can get steady working conditions without worrying about interviewing or turnover, and they are more likely to get familiar with colleagues and employers which may make their job flow smoothly and fluently. Another reason for doing at the same organization is the chance of promotion. If employees have years of experience in the same position at the same company, they will be credited for their loyalty and competency, and get more opportunities to be appointed to a higher level. As a consequence, they will find it easier to climb their career ladder, earn more money and achieve their goal. Be that as it may, working at the same company for the entire life seems not to be a good idea as this circumstance may drive people to be standstill and less active due to the repetition and familiarity.
Changing the workplace over the working time in one’s life can have certain benefits. To begin with, they can get more chances to work in a friendly environment with benign employers and colleagues. Furthermore, working in a variety of corporations can bring them multiple experiences in several fields, that will remarkably expand their knowledge. Next, they can get more chances to find their passion and strength because they try and make effort in a variety of positions; therefore, they could make the most of their ability. All in all, I see that working at different companies can be a beneficial experience that most employees should undergo during their working life.
In conclusion, each person has their own choice of deciding their working environment. However, working at a variety of corporations will be conducive to one’s ability and knowledge. It is advisable to try and learn new things, and step out of comfort zones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...their passion and strength because they try and make effort in a variety of positions; ...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ility and knowledge. It is advisable to try and learn new things, and step out of comfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02133333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79141031659 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.93760362 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.764705882 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329259208844 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109613003735 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091099801105 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212884479722 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595697739181 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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