Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others think it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views.
Sporting events have played pivotal roles in communities around the world throughout history. While some people claim that the practice of sports only brings recreational values, I personally believe that sport is far more than a form of entertainment.
First of all, the sport has always been an exercise to foster individual physical and mental development. For example, active people tend to have lower rates of diabetes and high blood pressure. Exercising regularly through sports programs could contribute to better heart and lung function. Besides, athletes are likely to have lower body mass indexes, but non-athlete participants will still benefit from building muscle and burning calories. Additionally, physical activity has been shown to have a positive influence on metal mental well being and some mental illnesses. Furthermore, physical training can be used in treatment for depression.
Physical activities like sports, whether for recreational professional or educational purposed purposes, are not merely about fitness or victory; above all, they are an essential building block of a prosperous and healthy society. Much like a country is the educational system, media, or political and social movements, sporting events bring disparate people together by strengthening ties and celebrating the common ideals of fairness, sacrifice, and hope. Sports in society remind us that following prescribed rules does not have to be boring and we must always carve out a place for fun in our lives. Moreover, watching and playing sports provide ways to escape the stress of our daily lives and come together as a community. Hosting sporting events can boost tourism and revenue for a city. As a result, sports in society can even influence our understanding of gender roles and socio-economic issues, and they can help frame the city.
In conclusion, although some people believe that sports are merely a leisure activity, I suppose support that sports are vital in society due to their advantages to people in terms of entertainment and finance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.453125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88496743645 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621875 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2958304565 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198495997988 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631971811807 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443096264529 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131398046765 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443325862471 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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