One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
This last decade has witnessed an escalation in the development of the medical industry. Some people believe that this improvement in medical care could extend the lifespan of people; meanwhile, others maintain that there are still relevant defects. Personally, I am of the opinion that there are both advantages and disadvantages. This essay will attempt to have a closer look at this issue.
To begin with, it is the fact beyond dispute that medical care improvement could offer several benefits. Firstly, hospitals do not face the overload of patients. That is to say, the ability to take care of a large number of patients without leaving anyone. Secondly, this will be a change for discovering the diseases on time. By this, I mean that we have enough time to take action promptly to treat the illness. There are numerous deaths caused by sickness with show symptoms. In brief, this development can save a human’s life from diseases.
Howbeit, there would also be the presence of accompanying drawbacks. No one can deny that there is heavyweight on the state budget if the government invests on medical industry. In other words, the government has no choice to add more taxes to residents. As a result, this becomes a cost burden of every house, including the rich and poor.
In conclusion, despite the disadvantages in terms of the increase in taxes, I am completely in favor of the development of the medical industry since their benefits are much more considerable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... is to say, the ability to take care of a large number of patients without leaving anyone. Second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, i mean, in brief, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02024291498 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81312141297 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619433198381 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6554146484 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263852302143 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665917553388 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502425625645 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137136401913 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056328194203 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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