Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send messages to contact them. Others, however, think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It has sparkled heated discussion among scientists that whether we should confirm the existence of aliens and contact with them by sending messages. While some consider it approachable, I agree with those who believe this might put human at great risk; However, I do think human should try to find them in other ways without exposing our existence and location.
Supporters might think that contacting with the extraterrestrial can help human make breakthrough in technology and serious problems. If they have more profound knowledge and are willingly to share with us, we can develop much more rapidly. For example, if extraterrestrial master advanced artificial intelligence technology, we can learn from them instead of experimenting and innovating for decades on our own. In addition, Aliens may also be carbon-based creatures and their home planet can be of similar conditions with ours. So they could give us suggestions on solving problems such as depletion of resources and global warming.
Although there is possibility for extraterrestrial to be friendly, we cannot ignore the truth that they might launch an attack and obliterate the Earth. There are many reasons for them to do so supposing the civilization that received our messages being super-intelligent. For instance If their planet is facing a calamitous problem, they might eliminate or enslave human and make earth their colony.
In my opinion, It is definitely wrong for human to send messages to outer-space because this action could lead us to extinction. Human will not have the ability to defense ourselves if interstellar wars take place. Instead, we can send spaceships to explore the universe which will not expose our position. Although It will take a tremendous amount of time and energies, this guarantee the safety of the Earth, and human can also gain first-hand knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30743243243 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05905586286 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3811011901 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131143794113 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438796732049 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398976560806 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806298613723 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479378769751 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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