Some scientists believe that studying the behavior of 3-year-old children can predict their criminality. To what extent do you think a crime is a product of human nature, or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
some scientists conclude that society can predict children's criminality by searching their behaviors when they grow at 3. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion. This essay will provide suitable reasons why nature behaviors can turn people into criminals and there are many solutions to stop this process.
First of all, It is true that the influent plays an important role in developing children's minds, which if kids are lived in a criminal family, they might learn and copy these illegal acts then gradually they will become crime just like them. Moreover, children might not understand what is rights or wrongs when they stay in a toxic environment. For example, a family after divorcing, their children will lack of care from both sides. As a result, this causes their emotions and awareness badly and leads to having some rebel actions on society when they turn into teenagers.
On the other hand, this problem can prevent by some solutions. The first solution is that both schools and parents create a good study environment for kids, which helps them train their talents effectively. For instance, parents will give kids rewards for every achievement that they have to rise their spirit up on studying. In addition, schools should find children's bad habits then say them to their families so they can have solutions to fix them as soon as possible.
In conclusion, I believe that both nature and nurture play a part in turning kids into good citizens or criminals. However, if schools and parents take care of them the right way, this phenomenon can be pushed back and maybe vanished in the future.
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first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9852398524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48201548464 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627306273063 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3750967854 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23992599645 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08592091813 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797480797936 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145401966172 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751729290622 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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