Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this, what can be done to tackle the problem
Few students are becoming ever more dependent on technology especially on computers and tablets. This essay will discuss one of the major causes of this problem and possible solutions.
The main reason, why young people playing online games rather than outdoor games, they have to go particular space to play. Instead of going to some other places, students choosing online games. moreover, parents are not allowing students to go out to play the games, because parents asking them to sit at home to do their homework to improve their educational skills. As well as, nowadays the availability of internet is more possible compare to before. for instance, the recent survey regarding the playing of online games says, every parent is encouraging their children to play at home without sending them to play outdoor games. As a result of this, students are concentrating on more online games instead of playing outside.
The possible solution for this cause is the implementation of games and health as a subject, and teachers should teach in the classroom, the importance of playing games and benefits of playing as well as conflicts of playing online games. In addition to that, provide the knowledge and benefits to the parents by the parent meetings. For instance, in the recent survey says eye problems are more common who were habituated with online games instead of playing outdoor games.
To sum up, playing online games are comfortable but participation in outdoor games are good for health. According to my view teaching of outdoor games importance and its relation to health is necessary for educational sectors.
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but, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13962264151 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65858630999 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516981132075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6221943289 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240114857688 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931815575167 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057387594773 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143648593533 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421925789683 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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