Some think that all entertaining TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable that every citizen should acknowledge social problems and current affairs from different means. To this end, some people claim that those issues should be embraced in every TV programme with recreational contents. From my point of view, although this is justifiable to some extent, I am of the opinion that it should not be obligatory for all TV shows to include social problems.
Admittedly, it can be denied that television’s entertaining programmes can provide a fertile ground for educating and informing people about social issues. To a greater or lesser extent, it is obvious that there should be certain meaningful values of every TV show, one of which can be to assist people with the acquisition of current affairs. As these types of shows and channels attract astronomical numbers of viewers, the spread of social affairs can be more ubiquitous and constructive. Hence, people can have better understanding about their social fabrics, the problems they are confronting and the like. This can lead to a better society with justices, impartiality and well-informed citizens.
However, there are glaring reasons why I believe the education of social issues should not be mandatorily conveyed through entertaining TV programmes. Since most of the social problems imply heavy contents, they are not in line with the flow and overall mood of recreational shows of fun and intriguing time. Furthermore, those social sections may bring disincentives to the viewers as they only come to entertaining programmes to unwind and find peace of mind, not to be educated about current affairs. Take Korea's Running Man show, after including contents about politics and military, the percentages of its watchers have decreased threefold. On a long run, this will take its toll on the profit of the Tv station and the programmes themself.
In conclusion, while the involvement of social issues in TV programmes is beneficial to some extent, I am convinced that it is not a one-size-fit-all to every entertaining shows as it interrupts the mood of the programmes as well as hinders viewers’ interest.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24705882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0484269016 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9109186429 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315737525127 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114888163469 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776414727292 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213833310243 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360197862511 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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