Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although criminal researches have regularly conducted throughtout the world yearly, the issue as to whether most offences depend on influences of living environment or the nature of delinquencies remains controversial. In my opinion, necessary desire and effects of society is heart of crime.
On the one hand, some may argue that most crime is derived from the low awareness of criminals. This argument could be true to some extent because in the modern life, sotisphicated equipment and state-of-art devices are an oportunity for the accessing government law conprehensively of all citizens. The reason that the lack of knowledge and difficulties in approaching to legal problem because of their background is unacceptable. Moreover, in one family, the traits of children who born by parents who have pshychological problem, violent, are formed like their parents in the future. Because the apple does not fall from the tree.
On the other hand, those who atribute responsibility to criminals’s nature are ignorant that the influences of circumstances have the significant role in offences. Because criminals are not born. They are make by hunger, wants, justice and illiteracy. Besides another factor add fuel to the fire is peer pressure of juvenile delinqunecy, as the saying goes people who keep companionship with a woft will learn how to howl. In the other word, the root cause has accountable for their offending is money, which responsible for most crime such as shoplifting, bank boberry, burglary… A typical example is African countries, the rate of criminal there is the highest throughout the world, integral parts of the poverty and violence regularly in these nation. For these reason, the offending behaviour is most objective, not subjective.
Taking all above mentioned facts into account, individual nature and conciuosness is an element of crime. However, the society and external factors are the culprit for every offending behaviour of criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...throughtout the world yearly, the issue as to whether most offences depend on influences of l...
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Line 2, column 588, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ormed like their parents in the future. Because the apple does not fall from the tree. ...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... have the significant role in offences. Because criminals are not born. They are make b...
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this nation' or 'these nations'?
Suggestion: this nation; these nations
...f the poverty and violence regularly in these nation. For these reason, the offending behav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43506493506 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11075561114 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1300200959 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181957115071 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499670352129 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496248309921 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942534766349 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441339118281 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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