Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining.
What do you think are the main reasons of long distance relationships?
What can be done to help couples feel closer?
Traditionally all over the world marriage has always been connected with creating an appropriate atmosphere young family starts to live in. In some exeptions couple have to reside in different locations and are forced to keep initially formed feelings. This essay will examine the main causes of spouses' separate life and propose possible solutions of this problem.
The main reasons of long distance relationships between spouses often are connected with job and old parents. Such a situation may arise if one of the partners is offered a well-paid job in another country, and the second chooses to stay at home and continue to build the career. This short or long separation is quite traumatic for both sides, who are busy with work and often forget about each other. Elderly or sick parents of one of the spouses, requiring care and attention often cause family's separation. Transportation in some cases is strictly prohibited, so children forced to choose between the partner and parents select the latter and live separately. Summarizing all mentioned above, main reasons of long distance wedlock are very close to each other, as they force spouses to make difficult choices and work with its consequences.
I strongly believe that the best actions to help keep the family apart are respect and frequent communication. When partners trust each other, accept the choice of spouse as their own and avoid discrimination, the chances of maintaining a family are greatly enhanced.
The development of social networks and mobile communications allows to maintain contact at a distance and share emotions at any time.
The trust of partners and the desire to keep abreast of each other's life is the key to a successful marriage, even at a distance.
Summing up, I can confidently say that distance marriage is a great test for both partners. At the same time, Each family has the power to change the attitude to the situation if it cannot change the situation itself as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
...tworks and mobile communications allows to maintain contact at a distance and share emotion...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... and the desire to keep abreast of each others life is the key to a successful marriag...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, well, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06707317073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77398147619 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3690149347 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.8 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199250100807 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624941674211 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662030947791 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804177398294 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470990516507 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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