Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining.What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer?
Since the beginning of the 21st century the entire world community has been suffering from various social challenges. An opinion exists that modern society is saturated with exciting opportunities across the globe, therefore couples struggle with maintaining close relationships from a distance. This particular essay will examine the reasons and describe potential things advises that can assist in dealing with the mentioned phenomenon.
I am convinced that the two main reasons for the forced separation of partners are various career opportunities or military operations. A vast majority of cities need highly qualified specialists in certain areas, therefore they can attract managers from other countries. Occasionally husband and wife are unable to move together due to commitments to their respective work, kids, and elderly parents. For example, in the USSR, my uncle was offered work in India, though his wife was raising two toddlers, was working in a large state company, therefore was not able to relocate with him. In addition, wars are constantly happening in certain lands, thereby living in such places is unsafe and family priorities are obliged to be changed. For instance, many magazines write that when a warzone occurs, females and youngsters move to safer places, while men remain to fight. Hence, career chasing and military operations do not allow folks to enjoy life collectively in their residences.
On a different note, modern technologies and opportunities to spend holidays and long weekends alongside could be beneficial for lovers to feel better. Access to the Internet is already available in almost every corner of the universe, so calling each other and texting is convenient now. For example, my brother serves in the Russian army, however he has a mobile phone and every night he calls his girlfriend. In addition, time off could be spent with beloved relatives and closest friends on a usual basis . For example, my uncle is employed by a Belarusian agricultural corporation and he is used to spend a huge amount of time in Minsk, though he travels home every weekend. Thus, the modern era allows relatives to stay in touch, thanks to the widespread use of the global web and pre-set up in advance vacation schedule.
Given all of the above, one of the biggest motives for living separately with spouses is business routine and potential hostilities. Constantly chatting, video calling and spending leisure time jointly is truly helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28101265823 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79327632235 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635443037975 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6085401215 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.888888889 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130704667591 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350388016693 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293670037998 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694022258563 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145267040173 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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