In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
According to the latest statistics, over last decades, a large part of world population suffer from starvation. Despite the fact that some significant development has been done in agriculture, but lack of food is one of the most considerable challenges. The reasons and solutions are discussed throughout the following paragraphs.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that several factors can influence the food productivity. As an outstanding instance, climate pattern changing which play a key role in global warming and increase in greenhouse gases, consequently, less rainfall. Another factor would be natural disaster such as drought or attack of pest which lead to destruction of crops.
On the other hand, overpopulation due to high birthrate or high immigration rate will bring with it high demand for food. Usage of fertilizer or pesticide to increase the productivity of farms cause soil degradation. In fact, the quality and quantity of crops has decreased because of soil erosion and depletion of mineral sources.
The third main reason is associated with political conflicts which restrict the international export and import of essential and modern agricultural equipment or material which impact people eating habits. Also, in those countries who are engaged in war, farmer might not be able to harvest crops and consequently, the price of food will surge and not many family are able to afford.
What can be done? There are some measure to be taken to address this problem. First, government should offer some financial assistance to farmer and provide them with some low interest loans to expand their activities. Another step that should be taken by government is prompting international relationships with developed countries to transfer new technologies to cultivate in mire area such as deserts. It should be mentioned that some friendly environmental programs should be applied to decline the effect of global warming.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that several factors are contributed to shortage of food such as climate change, natural disaster, war, soil degradation. Besides, there are some solution to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 353, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun family seems to be countable; consider using: 'many families'.
Suggestion: many families
...y, the price of food will surge and not many family are able to afford. What can be done?...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, so, third, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42521994135 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99617492492 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.600348842 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0311908188465 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00843324082631 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159826630531 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0172875162306 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245977905937 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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