In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
The world went through far in the agricultural sector in terms of infrastructure and fertilizing ways. Even through, this advancement in tools of agriculture, there are a lot of people suffering a poverty and they do not find their daily food. This essay will discuss this important issue and suggest solutions in the following paragraphs.
To begin with explanation this problem, despite of the development in agricultural domain, people can not provide food to their children because of bad management of resources and corruptible persons who lead this sector. Another point worth noting is the utilizing of output of agriculture process faced a tremendous problems because no qualified people might lead this procedure. To cite an example, a study has been conducted in Sudan country showed that, this country can provide a food not only people in Sudan but also can send food to people in other Arab countries. To repeat shortly, the more combating of corruption, the more achieving a huge results in eliminating of poverty.
Turning to suggest a solution to this big problem, authorities should combat the corruption in all sections especially in agricultural departments. Another factor to consider is government should increase their efforts to grow up the purchasing ability of their people. To show an example, Saudi Arabia launched recently a big campaign for combating corruption and the results started to appear. To put it simple, if a country wants develop certain sector, they need to select qualified persons to manage that sector.
To draw the conclusion, although, the huge achievement in terms of the infrastructure in agriculture section, countries have long distance to reach to food security and combat on the poverty in their people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27046263345 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95129170344 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4834499792 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.416666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181959822485 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670099906622 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064524346664 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103009869796 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840580336904 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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