World food production has increased steadily with enough food to feed everyone but that hasn't resulted in eradicating hunger in many parts of the world. I believe bad storage and distribution practices, as well as the wide disparity in affordability, are the primary causes for people still going hungry. Solving this issue would require targeted and sustained efforts to properly store and distribute different kinds of produce along with countries cooperating with each other to try and distribute food to poorer countries.
Food storage and distribution have not kept pace with the food production which results in large amounts of food grains and vegetables getting spoilt by natural forces like rain, heat etc as well as by rodents like rats, termites. A recent study done by a UK based group has found that almost forty to fifty percent of food grains are rot away as they are kept in the open or in inadequately made shelters. To make matters worse, whatever food is left edible is not properly distributed to people in need in poorer parts of the world. Another important reason is that many developing countries can not afford most of the food that is produced.
We can solve a big part of this problem simply by focusing less on increasing production and more on trying to preserve what we already produce which, by the way, is more than enough to feed everyone in the world. Scientists should find new and improved ways to store food by making better food storage facilities with good air conditioning, humidity control and pest control. Moreover, international organizations like the UN should strive to allocate funds to distribute extra food from developed nations to the poorer developing nations.
So, in conclusion, we see that by simply shifting our focus away from more production and towards better storage and distribution and with better cooperation between countries, we can alleviate world hunger to a large extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...h enough food to feed everyone but that hasnt resulted in eradicating hunger in many ...
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Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ountries cooperating with each other to try and distribute food to poorer countries. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07788161994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72557007839 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5484847324 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.181818182 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124176446289 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526429981556 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423862770734 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076270550774 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311263045038 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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