There is an increasing belief that the number of options to choose from has increased multifold in every aspect of daily life. I fully agree with this statement that in every small or big decision that we need to make on a daily basis, we are flooded with an overwhelmingly large number of options to choose from!
To start with, the most glaring example of an area that is flooded with innumerable choices is the apparel and clothing business. As soon as we start our day, we have to choose between so many options about what to wear for the day. I personally have to decide between shirts, trousers, jeans, shoes, jewelry, accessories, eyewear etc. I believe the main reasons for this is the combination of an increase in the advertisements, combined with the simultaneous increase in spending power, thus allowing people to know about and own more and more items for their daily use.
Another area which gives us innumerable choices is the food business. In older days the range of cuisines in any particular city would be limited with only the native dishes in any area but lately, there has been an explosion of sorts in the varieties of cuisines and restaurants that offer those cuisines in a city. A prime example of this would be visible in the online apps like Zomato which lists at least dozens of dishes and cuisines that one can order. Likewise, any reasonably populated city would have dozens of restaurants within a five-mile radius, each with a different cuisine from a different part of the world. The main reason for this is the steady influx of people from one country to another, thus any major city has people from almost all parts of the world.
In conclusion, we see that almost every major aspect of our life like eating, drinking, clothing etc has been flooded with choices. There are multiple more areas like what to watch, how to travel, mode of communication, mode of entertainment where we see the same increase in options. All of these can be attributed to increased globalization, the influx of people between countries and increase in their spending power. A mix of all of these factors creates an economy that provides a huge number of choices to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, thus, at least, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76377952756 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60460570937 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4382790677 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131298679167 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438234798302 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412710135491 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817991488608 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268573471071 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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