In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Agricultural development has positive impacts on human being, however, there still remains starvation in some regions all over the world. Although this could be caused by many issues, solutions can be taken to alleviate.
First and foremost, it is undoubted that the main problems resulting in food shortage can be various. Poverty in education can be listed as one of the most fundamental aspects leading people to low-self-awareness. They can give birth at high rates without tight control by government and as a result, it unintentionally becomes massive burdens on dealing with increasing food crisis. In addition, issues of hunger could stem from fighting for peace in consecutive wars amongst nations. Crops are destroyed and diseases spread in many areas; therefore, starvation is not an exception.
The possible measures to this global problem can be solved by short-term and long-term strategies. In terms of short-term tactics, it is encouraged to establish charity foundations that can raise funds to sponsor agricultural products and food for poor people. Health and medicine aids should be high priorities, particularly for local areas in which civil wars have lasted for decades and devastating infectious diseases have been painfully spreading. On the other hand, when we all take action to reduce thousands died of hunger all around the world, we need to have long-run solutions. It is vital to prevent nuclear power conflicts and build training centers for local residents.
In conclusion, many reasons can result in insufficient food supply all around the world, yet with the practical remedies, these problems could be addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3550.0 1615.20841683 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 10.8562691131 5.12529762239 212% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.7528465181 2.80592935109 454% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 897.3 506.74238477 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.7 1.60771543086 168% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 296.794026582 49.4020404114 601% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 322.727272727 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 36.0 4.38176352705 822% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0492678108503 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331706672878 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228316471002 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0247479012521 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468455649511 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.6 13.0946893788 341% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -51.02 50.2224549098 -102% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.6 11.3001002004 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 46.3 12.4159519038 373% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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