in spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people in the world still go hungry.
why is this the case?
what can be done about this problem
Agriculture has been a topic that attracts great attention in recent years. Although agricultural activities have been rapidly grown, many people now still have to face starvation. This essay aims to elaborate on some possible effects and solutions to this issue.
To begin with, there is a host of the reason why many people still go hungry regardless of agricultural development. In fact, agriculture activities actually only modify in some developed countries with the assistant of hi-tech machines such as China, Thailand or America. The poor residents in a remote area especially in underdeveloped countries do not have many opportunities to access sufficient technology or agriculture methods. In addition, suffering from severely natural disasters like flooding or drought may cause a lack of food production in this area and directly make people go hungry.
To solving that problem, a number of the solution has been addressed. The starvation in some nations could be reduced by using international aid and volunteer supplies. The government should consider spending budget state on improving the quality of agriculture machines in some remote areas with a view to increasing their standard of living. Moreover, people had better participate and raise funds on volunteer organizations to contribute to alleviating the starving issue of poorer areas.
In conclusion, the government should take action to help poorer people avoid starving such as supply food and money for them to improve their local agriculture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49787234043 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02351131019 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1493793877 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178413771139 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060783807211 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581646605145 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962910807966 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484273063506 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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