Sport is one of the most popular draws on television today. Some people argue that the practice of showing sport on television is to blame for the poor health of the young generation by encouraging them to watch rather than partake in physical activity.
Sport plays a vital role in everyone's life. Sports programs are gaining more and more popularity, nowadays. Few think that watching games over television are a cause of severe health conditions. However, I consider that it is not the only reason to blame.
To begin with, Instead of learning something from such kind of telecast, people just made it as a sort of leisure activity. But in actual, sports on television intended as the source of inspiration for the youth and to dig in their hills. To keep people updated about the latest sports event and to provide knowledge about different sports games. Another major consequence, individuals try to spend a lot of time watching such shows, in addition to this they also consume much fast food while watching that certainly have an inferior impact on health.
On the contradictory, there are many other factors too that needed to be considered while talking about health. Firstly, parents should not allow their child to spend more time on television and teach them a healthy lifestyle. They are permitting their children to see television all the time, undeniably, it has a negative effect on health. Secondly, it depends on the person, many of youth have the idea about bad effects of watching television for longer hours, while others do not care about it. So, one can not condemn watching sports as the only reason behind poor health.
To sum up, though, spending much time over television has a critical effect on our physique, yet, there are other circumstances too that needed to be taken into account when we talk about health and fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, kind of, sort of, talking about, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56663262459 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7745351966 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252025202898 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869872797919 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461171336402 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147087644997 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537590020441 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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