sports
People have different views about which aspect makes sportsperson achieve success in sport. While those who support mental qualities such as determination and dedication have their own good arguments, I firmly believe that the basis for success is being physically strong.
On the one hand, there are some good reasons why people tend to argue that mental strength plays a crucial role in sportsmen’s achievement. Firstly, sportspeople with a competitive spirit or a win-at-all-cost-attitude may lead to a motivation to work hard and succeed. Without the enthusiasm, the training given may be counterproductive and hours spending in the gym, for example, will be boring and repetitive. Secondly, failures and disappointments in sport are inevitable. Thus, it is necessary for athletes to be mentally strong enough to overcome such situations.
In spite of the above arguments, I side with those who advocate that physical strength is the key to success in sport. Unlike other people whose purpose for playing sports is to escape from everyday routine and keep fit, those who want to succeed in sport must be physically strong. An excellent example of this is sports such as weightlifting, swimming or athletics; they all require the athletes to have physical endurance and stamina. In the past, some sports stars were reported to have even used illegal substances such as performance-enhancing drugs to enhance their physical conditions.
In conclusion, both physical and mental strength are necessary for sportsperson to gain certain achievements. However it is impossible to succeed without being physically strong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...rtsperson to gain certain achievements. However it is impossible to succeed without bei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49800796813 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38022863427 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4889765367 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246633002636 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105764179036 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122381712007 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13772638403 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131174683929 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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