Student at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference.
Nowadays, many universities offering students the places to live whether live in college dormitories or live in apartments. However, there is some opinions about the merits live in apartments. In my side, I prefer university dormitories than flats.
In one hand, the biggest advantage of dormitory is the cost which doesn’t need bunch of money. Furthermore, some campuses accommodate the student a place to live for free which help their economic status. For example, 5 out of 20 undergraduates are struggling to pay tuition fee then the university inform them about scholarship and free sleep quarters for individuals with low income to middle income. As a result, they can more engage on their study then earn high score in exams and home works. In addition, most of the room are occupied by two till four persons in the same gender. Since, they are always in one room thus the socializing can be more effective. For instance, Land College is popular in their family relationship due to no boundaries between one student to others. Consequently, there is a night time and lots of rules that must be accomplished while live in the dorm.
However, apartments don’t have night time or rules but it lacks in social development. Moreover, some people choose to live alone because they don’t want any disturbances such as noisy sound or dirty clothes whereas dorms require their occupants toleration. Subsequently, renting or buying an apartment come with negative effects in money expenditures and also, only the rich who can afford it. Nevertheless, many students don’t understand their parents conditions.
To sum up, it is evident that living in dorms and in apartment have advantages and disadvantages otherwise it is important to ensure choice of place to prevent aftereffects and problems in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are some opinions'?
Suggestion: there are some opinions
...itories or live in apartments. However, there is some opinions about the merits live in apartments. In...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o till four persons in the same gender. Since, they are always in one room thus the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92335748617 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631756756757 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6563301281 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360036534895 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101326303556 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107606797739 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227841796023 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106093751837 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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