Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?
Over the last few decades, there have been ever-increasing trends that most of the high-school leavers are unable to use their money wisely . In fact, the above-mentioned tendency results from several factors, which can be handled by effective approaches .
It is undeniable that there are some explanations for the students, leaving high school ,
could not know the ways to move forward in life with such meager financial budget .Firstly, the current educational curriculum in developing countries concentrate on providing students with academic knowledge while neglecting the importance of teaching students life skills including soft skills as well as personal financial management. As a result, an increasing number of high-school graduate cannot get accustomed to balancing their income and expenditure Furthermore, most high-school learners, except for those living in poverty, have experienced a care-free period of their youth as their parents overindulge them and overprotect them from these financial problems .Therefore, they rely completely on their parental budget and they usually waste money on extravagant and unnecessary things.
It is obvious that there are several steps which could be taken in order to help students develop a wiser habits of spending money. The first one is that the syllabus for students at school should be adjusted to make soft skills especially money managing lessons become an optional subjects .This results in the increase in the students’ awareness of real financial difficulties waiting for them after graduating their high schools. Another idea worth mentioning is that parents should encourage their children to take part in some paid work after school time which can be considered as a great opportunity for them to get more familiar with the working environment and control the usage of the money made by themselves.
In conclusion, I believe that the fact that most high-school leavers do not have the capabilities to cope with their financial management is given rise to by two main reasons ,which is believed to be dissolved by feasible methods .Furthermore, I do agree that parents should let their children join as many outdoor activities as possible .
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-03-04 | Trần Thị Ngọc Mai | 84 | view |
| 2021-12-18 | vuhieuquy | 67 | view |
| 2021-12-11 | vuhieuquy | 59 | view |
| 2020-11-27 | minhtrile010@gmail.com | 71 | view |
| 2020-11-09 | klaralinh864 | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Over the last few decades, there have be...
^^
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that most of the high-school leavers are unable to use their money wisely . In fa...
^^
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rs are unable to use their money wisely . In fact, the above-mentioned tendency r...
^^
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om several factors, which can be handled by effective approaches . It is un...
^^
Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... can be handled by effective approaches . It is undeniable that there are s...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be handled by effective approaches . It is undeniable that there are some e...
^^^
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns for the students, leaving high school , could not know the ways to move forwar...
^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e ways to move forward in life with such meager financial budget .Firstly, the cu...
^^
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... life with such meager financial budget .Firstly, the current educational curricu...
^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...ife with such meager financial budget .Firstly, the current educational curriculum in ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ional curriculum in developing countries concentrate on providing students with a...
^^
Line 4, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hose living in poverty, have experienced a care-free period of their youth as the...
^^
Line 4, column 676, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...otect them from these financial problems .Therefore, they rely completely on their...
^^
Line 4, column 678, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ect them from these financial problems .Therefore, they rely completely on their parental...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on extravagant and unnecessary things. It is obvious that there are several ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ging lessons become an optional subjects .This results in the increase in the st...
^^
Line 6, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ng lessons become an optional subjects .This results in the increase in the studen...
^^^^
Line 6, column 324, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l subjects .This results in the increase in the students' awareness of real...
^^
Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts .This results in the increase in the students' awareness of real financ...
^^
Line 6, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the students' awareness of real financial difficulties waiting for them ...
^^
Line 6, column 571, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part in some paid work after school time which can be considered as a great oppor...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sage of the money made by themselves. In conclusion, I believe that the fac...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent is given rise to by two main reasons ,which is believed to be dissolved by fea...
^^
Line 8, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eved to be dissolved by feasible methods .Furthermore, I do agree that parents sho...
^^
Line 8, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ed to be dissolved by feasible methods .Furthermore, I do agree that parents should let the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n as many outdoor activities as possible .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, except for, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48104956268 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.984611458 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.297206521 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.0 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.875 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252814339307 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106802910381 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055173981965 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143097008867 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026654114343 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.