Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agure that scholars should expend money for full their tuition fee, because college instruction brings personal advantage rather than community. In my opinion. I strongly disagree with this statements
first of all, in our contemporary world, the payment for education in the universities is considerably high and higher. So that, some talented and intelligent students do not have a opportunity to learn in it. In my view, if society countinues this situation,it will be a disadvangtage in the development, beacause most scholars today choose their majors and universities based on their financial ability instead of relying on their interest and passions. Hence, they cannot enhance their talented to contribute to the developments of a nation.
Secondly, an idividual has an important influence on a group. It seems to me that learnerd after graduation, some of them will start their own bussiness and can create jobs for the others. Consequently, the unemployment problem will get lower. Thus, this personal is indirectly helping the community, they are serving a lot for the terms of developments to the coutry.
in conclusion, the state should give their funding to a part of students’s tuition fee to support scholars’s financial ability. The last, I strongly believe that students should be help the government and society by their highly studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36574074074 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07786120469 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1588915995 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5833333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248215422998 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724518137552 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602591332988 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142550387665 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485288885649 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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