Students should pay the the full cost for their own study, because the university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, it is argued that students need to spend money on tuition in further education college because higher education brings more advantages to their studies than community. I believe that it has many drawbacks for pupils.
Firstly, the government does not pay tuition fees for people having financial issues can lead to the status of students being unable to study at the university. These days, society is more developed, and some main majors in university are very necessary such as science, medicine, etc. There is a lot of time for students to study these majors at university. Therefore If the government is supported by the state to go to school, students will have many useful skills. That may reduce the problem of lack of jobs for young people.
Secondly, pupils have to pay for their education cause they higher under pressure. Many students not only study at university but also find job-parttime at a few small shops. Students are more stressed to balance between their work and their studies. As a result, students can not keep up with their studies in class. Gradually, they feel anxious and tired so pupils decide to drop out of their major in school.
All things considered, the government should pay for the education fee. It not only helps pupils having financial problems but also it will give some positive effects on their country in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96120689655 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50234358048 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590517241379 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6473124554 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259336577007 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907946074477 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510977807587 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161964382438 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320661936365 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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